Gotta love the AFA, though. A few minutes ago, the announcer on the PA system called our attention to ‘an unmanned aerial vehicle’ over on the southeast corner of the mezzanine that is (as best as I can remember the language) ‘designed for interdiction against perishable targets’ — or, as I turned to Sandra and said, “It’s a killer drone.” Heh. I also like the fact that the jumbotron on the scoreboard shows military types going through an obstacle course, including bayonetting dummies. Not many college commencement exercises where you’d see that. God bless the USAF, and may our enemies ever fear us.

More later. Maybe. below. In the meantime, here’s the podium area.

0930 MDT

Black limos and SUVs are coming out of the north tunnel and lots of men in dark suits have appeared. I assume the President will be making his appearance shortly.

In the meantime, here’s the photo I shot earlier:

0955 MDT
Apparently, the President has been hanging out behind the podium for the last 25 minutes. On the other hand, it’s high (we’re at 7000′+), dry, sunny, and warm moving towards hot, so I can’t blame him much.

Big cheer, and the crowd comes to its feet…for the AFA class of 2012, which has just appeared at the north tunnel.

1013 MDT
I was wrong — Pres. Obama was waiting in the north tunnel as well and walked out after the graduuating class and after the Sec’y of the USAF, the AFA Commandant, and a few AFA leaders. The applause for Pres. Obama was not as strong as for those who preceded him, though there were cheers — but there were also some scattered (and clearly audible) boos.

Couldn’t see if Pres. Obama had his hand over his heart during the National Anthem.

1022 MDT

Sec’t of the Air Force Michael Donley is now speaking and introducing Pres.Obama. “The President’s leadership has produced a number of national security accomplishments” — aside from killing OBL, they are mostly missteps, IMHO. “Having persued a career of public service himself, Pres. Obama understands the service of the military.”

Pres. Obama is now speaking. And, yes, I can see teleprompters. General introductory remarks; call out for leaving Chief of Staff — and, yes, Obama just mentioned OBL himself, as well. Tells a few good inside-AFA jokes. “Four years ago, you arrived at a time of great challenge. We were engaged in two wars…our relations around the world were strained…we were in the worst recession since the Great Depression. You are graduating into a new world. For the first time in 9 years, there are no Americans fighting in Iraq.” [wait for it] “We killed OBL” (or words to that effect). “As more Afghans step up, more of our troops will come home. We are not just ending these wars, we are doing so in a way that makes us safer and stronger.” Once again avoiding the word ‘victory’.

“For a decade, we have labored under the dark clouds of war. But now we can see the light ahead. Ending these wars also ensures that the burden of our security no longer falls so heavily upon your shoulders. Around the world, the United States is leading once more. Our alliances are stronger than ever. Our ties are even deeper. We are leading on global security, reducing our nuclear arsenal with Russia even as we maintain a nuclear deterrent…We are leading economically, boosting our exports…We’re expanding exchanges and collaborations in areas that people often admire most about America…….We’re standing with the people of the Middle East as they seek liberty…Helping to liberate Libya, where we led _from the front_.” (Emphasis his). “There’s a new confidence [around the worlld] in our leadership….Of course, the world stage is not a popularity contest…But make no mistake: how we’re viewed in the world has consequences.” Yep.

“The United States is stronger and safer and more respected in the world….Let’s put aside the tired notion that we’re weaker or that America is in decline….During the Great Depression, some thought it was the end of capitalism. But we went on to create the greatest middle class ever…Because of our dedication for the values we stand for, the Berlin Wall came tumbling down [and what caused that, exactly?]….Never bet against the United States of America. The United States has been and always will be the one indispensible nation in the world. America is exceptional, and the 21st century can be another American century. We’ll pay down our deficits, reform our tax code, andn [something else that's a standard Republican talking point].”

“We must be vigilant [in defense of the US]…We will maintain our military superiority in all areas…and as our veterans rejoin American life [he earlier mentioned the military becoming 'leaner'], we will be sure they get all the benefits coming to you.” Mentioning Libya and Afghanistan again. “I see an American century, because no other naton seeks the role we play in global affairs and no other nation can accomplish our role in global affairs.” Metioned “combating climate change”. “More and more people are reaching towards the values and goals that we do.” Sounds a lot like Bush throughout much of this address. “Sure, there will always be governm,ents that resist the tide of democracy…We welcome freedom; they don’t” [etc.] “We stand with the student in the street…we stand with women everywhere…we stand with activists, entreprenuers, all those who strive for justice and freedom.”

More talk about American exceptionalism and capability, ending on a rousing note. I’m wondering where is the Obama who talked about “at some point, you have enough money” and “you can’t keep your SUVs” and “we can’t be the world’s policeman”. Again, Bush, McCain, or Romney could have given this speech — but they would have been (IMHO) at lot more credible doing so — and the media would probably have described it as “right-wing red meat”.

Good applause at the end of the speech — not surprising, since there wasn’t much to object to in the talk. However, Pres.Obama was just presented the “Distinguished American Award” from the USAFA, and the applause was pretty tepid.

1106 MDT

Classy move, though: Pres. Obama is saluting and shaking the hand of every graduating cadet. Good for him.

1132 MDT

Up to Squadron 10 (out of 40); Matt, the cadet we came for, is in Squadron 23. Probably have another 45+ minutes to go before they’re all done (they seem to be speeding up as they go along). In the meantime, I went to use the facilities. I fully understand and sympathize with women about bathroom facilities at sports venues like this. There were fully 60+ women waiting in line for the women’s bathroom. There was no line at all for the men’s room. Of course, the urinal in the men’s room consisted of two walls at right angles with a 12″ wide trough running along their base.

My wife, commenting on Obama’s address, said she found herself listening to what he said and thinking, “Does he have no sense of irony about what’s he’s saying?” She also noted that Obama said nothing about the Constitution and individual rights and freedoms within our own country.

1153 MDT

The sun is getting pretty intense, even if the air is still pleasant. My Logitech iPad keyboard is starting to get hot to the touch. I give sincere and serious props to Pres. Obama for going the distance in saluting and shaking the hand of every single graduate.

True fact: there’s a USAFA Class of 2012 graduate named James Fenimore Cooper (Squadron 16).

1231 MDT

Up to Squadron 35 (out of 40). Clouds have been moving in from the north and are now largely blocking the sun, cutting the heat significantly. Actually, the clouds to the north look as though they could bring rain, but if they do, it probably won’t happen until later this afternoon. Once the graduation ceremonies are over, the USAF Thunderbirds are going to put on an air show.

Kids (“ages 7 to 10″) are gathering at the south end of the football field. They get to collect and keep the hats that the cadets throw into the air at the end of the graduation ceremony. Great tradition.

1249 MDT

All graduated and commissioned. It was worth the time and the heat just to be here when a few thousand cadets newly-commissioned 2nd Lts threw their caps into the air as five jet fighters roared past overhead. Still have the air show to watch.

Great movies that hit their target are hard to review, and Joss Whedon pretty much smacked this puppy out of the park. He made a 2:23 ensemble superhero movie that never lags and that doesn’t shortchange any of the characters. The real telling sign: my sweet wife, who is more tolerant of than eager about superhero/action films, turned to me as the movie ended and said, “This was wonderful!”

What more can I say? Well, all the actors did a better job in this film than in their lead-in superhero films, with the possible exception of Robert Downey Jr (who, as far as I can tell, was born to play Tony Stark/Iron Man and was absolutely outstanding in the first “Iron Man”). Chris Evans (Captain America), Chris Hemsworth (Thor), Scarlett Johansen (Black Widow), Samuel Jackson (Nick Fury) and even Clark Gregg (Agent Coulsen) all had a great platform and did an outstanding job. Jeremy Renner (Hawkeye) got a chance to be significant rather than the bit part he had in “Thor”. Mark Ruffalo, the third person to place Bruce Banner/the Hulk, does in my opinion a better job with fewer lines or screen time than either Eric Bana or Edward Norton.

The real key, in my opinion, was the choice of Tom Hiddleson (Loki) as the arch-villain for this film. Hiddleson (and Kenneth Branaugh’s direction) gave the “Thor” movie complexity and gravitas that saved it from being a silly B-grade superhero movie. He does the same thing here; you really believe in him as Loki, and he is often several steps ahead of those who are trying to stop him. Hiddleson was outstanding and deserves tremendous credit.

But the credit, above all, goes to Joss Whedon for both his writing and direction. At the start of the film, there’s a certain awkwardness in this group of disparate heroes, most of whom don’t even consider themselves to be heroes. They clash, figuratively and literally, and hardly seem up to the task in front of them until events lead them to put aside their own squabbles and agendas, and they come together as a team. “Come together” is such a trite cliche, yet it is very much what happens, and it happens in a real way.

Whedon writes great dialog and funny scenes, and there are plenty of both in this film. The special effects are great — and can I just say, some forty years after I first saw it in a “Nick Fury, Agent of S.H.I.E.L.D” comic, how wonderful it was to the the SHIELD heli-carrier on the big screen.

Highly, highly recommended, even if you’re not a comic book fan. Spoilers after the jump.

WARNING: SPOILERS BELOW!!

Agent Coulsen (Clark Gregg), who has been the ‘Wedge Antilles‘ of this series of Marvel films, is killed by Loki, stabbed from behind. Whedon being Whedon, you had to suspect that someone would die, and I had been tracking the various reports of follow-up films for any clue that one of the superheroes might buy the farm. I never suspected Coulsen would be the one, which gave his death all the more impact. And Coulsen, dying, recognizes that his death might be the one thing that brings the still-squabbling Avengers together. He’s right, though Fury does some rather shameless manipulation to make sure that happens.

It is the Hulk who ends up with some of the best “lines”, though in his case, they are mostly actions. The best is a scene where Loki and the Hulk are facing off in Tony Stark’s penthouse. Loki is monologuing on how Earthlings are beneath him when the Hulk grabs him and — in a move straight out of Looney Tunes cartoons — slams him back and forth on the floor three times in quick succession, leaving him dazed, unmoving, and partially embedded in the floor. The audience erupted in spontaneous applause and laughter.

Finally, there are not one but two ‘after the film’ scenes, one at the end of the major credits, the second at the very end of all credits. The first one shows long-established Marvel supervillain Thanos as the one behind Loki’s invasion of Earth. The second one — a follow-up to a comment made by Stark during the film — shows the Avengers, in costume and apparently immediately after the final battle, sitting around in a shawarma restaurant, mostly shell-shocked, as the staff is cleaning up damage from the destruction. Even though the scene goes on for 30 seconds or so, no one says anything; they just all look at each other or stare off into space (though Thor is unfazed and eating).

Great, great film. We saw it in 2D; I’ll probably try to go see the 3D IMAX version sometime next weel.  ..bruce..

My sweet wife and I went to see “The Hunger Games” today. I’ve read all three novels and enjoyed them — they are a cut above the usual Young Adult novels and are a bit dark and unrelenting. The release buzz for the film itself was very positive, so I was interested to see just how good it was.

It was outstanding.

That’s not a word I use lightly. Acting, directing, writing, cinematography, art direction were all excellent. The bleakness of District 12 looked more like a documentary about pre-WWII Appalachia that a film setting. Likewise, the gaudiness of Panem made the citizens thereof look like the privileged, self-obsessed class that they are. Casting was great; both Woody Harrelson and Donald Sutherland stayed in their roles instead of chewing scenery, while Stanley Tucci — who is one of the best and most versatile actors around — makes you like his Caesar Flickerman even as you recognize the awfulness of his role in these brutal games. I’ve seen some grumbling about the creature special effects near the end of the film, to which I say: get a life. The effects were fine. Not stunning like “John Carter”, but then again, the film didn’t cost a quarter of a billion dollars to make and will likely be profitable after this weekend.

Beyond that, this may be the single best book-to-film adaptation I’ve ever seen. It trimmed where it needed to in order to get down to the 2:22 running time, yet did no violence to the novel or its characters. It resisted the temptation to make the very end either more resolved or more dramatic than it was in the book — no hope-and-glory scene, no cliffhanger or overt threat.

Also, the film made me tear up. More than once. Actually, I came close to sobbing outright at one scene, but fortunately I have years of practice of stifling such noises in a theater.

Finally, it was brilliantly marketed and released. It is likely to have a near-record opening weekend, and I fully expect it to stay in the #1 box-office slot for several weeks — the “Titanic” effect, if you will — possibly until “The Avengers” opens on May 4th. I also think this will be the highest-grossing film for 2012, so for those who did grumble about effects, don’t worry: they’ll have a ton of money to spend on the second and third films.

In all, as I said to my wife while we walked back to our car, it was everything “John Carter” was not. Spoilers, such as they are, after the jump.

If you’ve read the book, I have no spoilers for you, because the ending is faithful and intact. For those of you who want to know the ending but haven’t read the book — yes, Katness and Peeta both survive and get out, by threatening a joint suicide after they’re the only two Tributes left. At the very end, President Snow, who rules over Panem and the twelve Districts, is clearly unhappy with how things turned out. Katness and Peeta — who had a ‘public’ romance during the games to gain sympathy and sponsors — return to District 12, where Gale — Katness’s best friend before the games, who clearly has a romantic interest in her as well — is waiting. Peeta asks Katness, “What happens now?” And she responds, “I don’t know.”

And there the movie ends. ..bruce..

In case it’s not quite clear:

..bruce w..

UPDATE [3/12/12]: They should have let Brad Bird direct instead of Andrew Stanton. Bird did “The Incredibles” (and has since done MI-4); Stanton did “Finding Nemo” and “WALL-E”. Which director do you think would have done a better job with a swashbuckling retro-SF story?

UPDATE[3/16/12]: I went to see “John Carter” again yesterday, and pretty much stand by what I said below, with a few more additions.

First, I think the whole Tars Tarkas/Sola/Sarkoja story was poorly handled. First, it starts with a hard-to-swallow leap: Carter somehow guesses (“a father’s intuition”) that Sola is Tarkas’s daughter, even though Carter has been on Barsoom for only a day and he’s dealing with an alien race — and yet, none of the Tharks have reached the same conclusion. Second, it is too terse, rushed and obscure. If you’ve read the books, you know this has to do with the culture of the Tharks and that Tarkas represents a bit of a throwback to kinder, gentler Tharks. I suspect those not familiar with the books were mostly confused at why this was all significant. I would either drop this story line entirely, or I would have condensed it into a single, more detailed exposition after Tarkas takes Carter into the tent to ostensibly slay him (after the temple incident).

Second, the movie left it very unclear — even after two viewings — why Sola was branded. Was it because Carter broken his chains and escaped? Was it because she somehow implanted him with the Barsoomian language (itself a confusing sequence — was it due to the fluid she gave him, some sort of telepathic imprint, or both?). Same thing with the “9th Ray” — it’s referenced, but never really explained.

Third, there appears to be a massive chronological/continuity flaw in the film, as well as possibly some distance problems, due largely to the Hollywood habit of compressing events into as short a time period as possible. Working from memory, the film’s chronology appears to go as follows:

• Day 1: Carter arrives on Mars and is captured by the Tharks; that night, he escapes, is chased by Woola, kills a Thark with a single blow; is generally accepted.
• Day 2: the Zodanga v. Helium air battle takes place; Carter rescues Dejah Thoris; they go (with Sola) into the temple that night and are caught; Tarkas takes them into his tent to execute them, but lets them escape.
• Day 3: Carter, Thoris, Sola and Woola ride across the desert. It is unclear how long they are traveling, but it is likely several days. I’ll be extremely generous and say that it’s two weeks (14 days), even though the movie never shows riding or camping at night, and it would also conflict with how long it takes Sola to later get from Iss to Zodanga.
• Day 17: Carter and company reach the River Iss, go to the temple, come back. Carter and Woola fights the Warhoons (and how did Woola not get killed? A single short or two would have done it); Carter and Thoris are rescued by a Helium ship and taken to Zodanga; Sola is left on foot, as is Woola.
• Day 18: it is possible that some time elapses here in Zodanga, though nothing indicated that. I’ll add another week just to be generous (and to give time for Sola and Woola to make it to Zodanga).
• Day 25: Kantos Kan helps break Carter out; Carter visits Thoris; he is captured by Matai Shang; they watch the wedding procession; Woola helps him escape; he finds Sola outside the city; they all fly to the Tharks. Carter is taken prisoner; he meets up with Tarkas; he fights the white apes; he challenges and kills Tal Hajus. The Tharks mobilize and Carter leads them on thoat-back to Zodanga; he flies to Helium and disrupts the wedding; the Tharks arrive on flyers and help defeat the Zodangans; Carter and Thoris marry.
• Day 26: In the wee, small hours of the morning, Carter wanders to another part of the palace and meets up with Matai Shang, who sends Carter back to Earth, where he finds that his body is covered with dust, his clothes crackle, and Powell’s head at least has been reduced to what appears to be a fairly clean skull.

In four weeks? All flesh is off of Powell’s skull, in a desert setting, in four weeks? And note that four weeks is a generous estimate; if you go by what the movie actually shows, you would think that the entire story takes place in about 4, maybe 5 days. The logical assumption would be that Carter’s “late night restless walk” is taking place months or even years after the marriage (which is what actually happens in the book, though it is a different type of incident that sends him back to Earth). However, when the camera closes in on Carter while he’s standing at the balcony, you can still clearly see the bruises and scrapes from the fight at the wedding.

On top of this, there is no clear indication of the relative locations of and distances between Zodanga, Helium, the River Iss, and the Thark city. Look at all the action and traveling in Day 25 above; for this to work out, the Thark city and Zodanga would have to be very close indeed (and note that Zodanga is always moving). Also note that Sola made it on foot from the River Iss to Zodanga during whatever period Carter was being held in Zodanga.

For a $250 million film, this is very sloppy continuity and plotting, and I think it’s yet another reason why a lot of people left the film with a vague (or not so vague) sense of confusion.

ORIGINAL POST:

As I said in my review yesterday, there was much I liked about “John Carter”, but there were some major flaws: too complicated, too slow in getting to Barsoom (Mars), and a poor characterization of John Carter himself (and corresponding poor casting). Since seeing it yesterday, I’ve formed a few opinions on how it could have been a better, shorter and more successful film. Keep in mind this is being written in one sitting, and that I’ve only seen the movie once, so it’s largely off the top of my head — but I think it points in a better direction.

First, the title. Those idiots at Disney apparently were so paranoid over the word “Mars” that they passed over the perfect title: “A Princess of Mars”, the actual title of Edgar Rice Burroughs’ first Barsoom novel. The immediate disjunction between “princess” — which suggests knights and chivalry and fantasy — and “Mars” — which suggests space and rockets and science fiction — provides a compelling hook. Princesses on Mars? Really? How can that be? It immediately tells you to expect the unexpected — as opposed to the title “John Carter”, which tells you nothing at all. It also sets up the storyline: John Carter meeting, being attracted to, defending, offending, protecting, pursuing, being rejected by and ultimately winning Dejah Thoris, the aforementioned princess of Mars, and in the processing causing — as an unintended side effect — great social, political, and (in the 2nd and 3rd Barsoom novels) religious upheaval in his wake.

Second, the characterization and casting of John Carter. In the Barsoom novels, John Carter is a polite, chivalrous, self-assured but self-deprecating swordsman and fighter, with a wry sense of humor. He is never quite so happy as when he in engaged in a challenging swordfight; while he does not kill for pleasure, he has no problem doing so when life or honor is at stake, and often smiles when he’s in the middle of a fight. Think of a melding of Will Turner (Orlando Bloom’s character) from the first “Pirates of the Caribbean” film and the Dread Pirate Roberts from “The Princess Bride”. Here’s ERB’s description of his “Uncle Jack” at the start of “A Princess of Mars”:

He was a splendid specimen of manhood, standing a good two inches over six feet, broad of shoulder and narrow of hip, with the carriage of the trained fighting man. His features were regular and clear cut, his hair black and closely cropped, while his eyes were of a steel gray, reflecting a strong and loyal character, filled with fire and initiative. His manners were perfect, and his courtliness was that of a typical southern gentleman of the highest type.

His horsemanship, especially after hounds, was a marvel and delight even in that country of magnificent horsemen. I have often heard my father caution him against his wild recklessness, but he would only laugh, and say that the tumble that killed him would be from the back of a horse yet unfoaled.

This, of course, is vastly different from the shaggy, sullen, angry, hostile, reluctant John Carter, portrayed by Taylor Kitsch, that we meet and have to endure through much of the film. Frankly, a clean-cut Gerard Butler or Chris Hemsworth would have been a better choice. Heck, simply a clean-cut and cheerful Taylor Kitsch would have been a better choice. Let’s leave it at that, so I don’t have to play “what-ifs” about casting.

Title sequence/prologue: drop the voice over, shot of Mars, early shots of John Carter, etc. Instead, start immediately with Edgar Rice Burroughs (ERB) riding in a horse-drawn cab to his Uncle Jack’s mansion on a rainy afternoon, with the title “A Princess of Mars” appearing and then fading away over the arrival sequence. We’ve now added a third source of cognitive dissonance, since the time and setting appears neither fantasy nor science fiction. We can then pretty much use the ERB arrival and exposition as filmed (perhaps tightened up just a wee bit), but with one exception: when ERB opens Carter’s journal for the first time, he opens it in the middle to Carter’s drawing of Dejah Thoris. He then turns back to the start and begins reading….

A (clean cut and humorous) John Carter walks into the saloon/general store to buy supplies. He tries to cajole the merchant into giving him more supplies on credit, but reluctantly takes out and places the gold ingot on the counter. The merchant holds it up to examine it — and the three toughs in the saloon suddenly get up, gather around — one drawing a gun — and ask Carter if he’s got more gold. Carter tries to talk his way out of it, but they don’t buy it. Carter then reluctantly digs into his pocket, pulls out another ingot — and flips it in the air up over their heads. As they all look up and grab for it, Carter whips out his cavalry sword, stuns one tough with slamming the end of the hilt into his head, disarms the one with the gun with the flat of the blade (breaking the tough’s finger in the process), and puts his foot on the fallen gun as he has the point of his sword at the third tough’s throat, drawing a bead of blood — this all happens just as the ingot clatters on the floor. Carter draws his own pistol with his left hand and suggests that the two conscious thugs take their unconscious friend and leave — and tells them that if he runs into them again, he won’t be so gentle with them. They leave, muttering threats. Carter picks up the ingot, turns, and finds the merchant hastily working to fill his order of supplies.

Next scene, Carter is riding somewhere outside of town and meets up with his prospecting partner, James Powell, who’s riding towards town. Powell is excited — he thinks he’s finally put together where the apparent source of the two ingots — the ‘cave of the spider’ is — but that the Apaches don’t want them going there. “Is it sacred to them?” “No…it seems more like it’s cursed or evil. And the Apaches aren’t in a mood to tolerate white folk right now.” Carter and Powell come around a bend in the ground and discover — the three toughs on horseback, with a few more friends. Both are startled, but Carter and Powell react first and light out, with the toughs pursuing and firing occasional shots at them. Some scenes here could establish Carter’s outstanding (and reckless) horsemanship. They come over a rise and run (full speed) into and through an even larger group of Apaches on horseback. Carter and Powell ride right through, and the Apaches and the toughs engage each other. Carter and Powell keep riding but Powell starts losing control of his horse, and it becomes apparent that he’s been hit. They can’t head back to town, so they ride in the direction (according to Powell) of the cave.

Here we can pretty much pick up the film more or less: they stop in the ravine below the cave, Carter sends both horse continuing up the ravine, he get Powell up to the mouth of the cave, the Apaches show up, are scared away, Carter goes in the cave, meets the Thern, gets transported, and wakes up in a strange looking desert, discovers he can leap high, meets Tars Tarkas, learns the language through Sola’s efforts, chafes a bit at being an amusement to the Tharks, fights one who mistreats Sola, and is accepted as an honorary Thark, and is grateful to have a sword back in his hands — though he’s curious that the sword they give him seems small for a Thark. He’s also curious why the Tharks don’t find him as strange and unusual as he finds them.

He finds out the next day when a Thark raiding party returns with what appears to be a human female. He tries to get near her, but is blocked from doing so by the Thark who led the raiding party. He uses his jumping ability to get to the (high) room where she’s being held. He meets Dejah Thoris — and now we can get a bit of the backstory about Barsoom and Zodanga. Thoris plays up her 9th ray research and says nothing about being a princess; she says she was ambushed by Tharks while searching for some ancient ruins that might hold the key she needs to make the 9th ray technology work. As is the film, she’s puzzled by Carter’s ignorance of all things Baroomian (such as flying ships) and treats as outright lies his stories about actual seas of water.

He and Sola help her escape (fill in great action sequence), Thoris proving her own fighting chops in the process, and it’s clear that mutual respect is growing. We can stick in the Temple of Issus sequence here — as part of her ongoing 9th ray research — but afterward, instead of more Tharks showing up (or, perhaps, as they show up), they are picked up by a Helium airship. (Sola and Woola are left off after a while, at Sola’s request; she wants to go back and see her father, Tars Tarkas). Carter learns that Thoris is actually a princess and heir to the throne of Barsoom, and that Helium ships have been searching for her. Thoris turns a bit formal on him, and Carter takes it with wry resignation. However, when she thanks him for his help in escaping and says, “I will always be grateful to you, my chieftain.” Carter inclines his head and says, “I was honored to do so, my princess” — and it’s immediately apparent by the shocked reactions around him that he’s committed some kind of major faux pas. Thoris gets very cold and formal, saying, “It is only because you are from — somewhere far away — that I do not have you thrown off this ship. Never presume to say that to me again.” And she stalks off.

Carter is at a loss as to what he’s done — everyone else is treating him coldly as well — but Kanton Kan, who is one of the ‘fighter pilots’ aboard the ship, takes Carter aside and explains to him that while Thoris’s use of “my chieftain” signified her gratitude and approval of his fighting prowess on her behalf, his use of the phrase “my princess” implied that she had, ah, pledged herself to him, body and soul. Carter sighs and says, “You know, I was never very good with women back on Earth, either.” He and Kan commiserate a bit [I really like how Kantos Kan was portrayed in the movie] and bond enough that Kan shows him how the one-man flyers work, giving Carter something to do, since Thoris refuses to see him or be around him. Carter, after a few stumbles, suddenly realizes how to relate riding a one-man flyer to riding a horse, and starts to improve, while delighting in the ability to move in three dimensions and taking risks that even has Kan shaking his head. (Carter: “The tumble that kills me will be from a flyer yet unbuilt. Besides — I can survive a much higher fall than you.”)

The ship runs into a few other Helium ships and Thoris is transferred to another ship. They then run into a Zodangan fleet, and a big aerial battle occurs. The Helium fleet is clearly losing due to the Thernian technology that Zodanga is using, and Carter uses his flyer to rescue Thoris from death, though their combined weight forces the flyer to the ground. (Kan, under direct orders from Thoris and against all his warrior ethics, flees the battle in his own one-man flyer to inform Helium about Dejah Thoris and the battle.) The surviving Zodangan ships land — and the fleet turns out to be led by Sab Than, Jeddak of Zodanga himself. He says that a ship carrying her father – Tardos Mors, Jeddak of Helium — is coming out to meet him in a few days under a flag of truce, and if she doesn’t agree to the marriage, he will allow Mors to return to Helium — and then he, Sab Than, will continue the war, with the obvious outcome. And he (Than) pleads a heartfelt appreciation for Thoris’s beauty, courage, and intellect. With a look of great internal struggle — and a pained glance at Carter — Thoris agrees only to make no decision until she has spoken with her father.

That glance did not go unnoticed by Than, who summons Carter to him late that night. Sab Than says that while his Thern mentor wants Carter brought back to Zodanga alive, Than is not so sure that’s a good idea. He pricks Carter with the point of his sword, sees the red blood, and says, “They say you’re from another world. I would not believe it but for your blood. No doubt you have a fascinating story to tell, and under other circumstances, I think we could be good friends.” (Carter looks skeptical.) “But I want no complicating factors where Dejah Thoris is involved.” He then nods at his guards — who drop the railing behind Carter just as the ship suddenly banks to one side. Carter vanishes in the darkness, and the ship levels off and cruises on. The next morning, on the Zodangan ship, Sab Than tells Dejah Thoris that Carter left the ship to find a way back to his own world.

Elsewhere, that same morning, Carter comes to, having clearly been unconscious and feeling quite battered. He gets up and looks around to figure out where he is and why he’s still alive — and sees that he’s on a very tall rise, a mesa a few thousand feet high, in the middle of the dead sea bottoms.  He sees ruins off in the distance that look familiar. He is able to pick (and jump) his way down the slopes of the mesa and heads towards the ruins — only to find himself facing an attacking horde of Tharks.

Big battle sequence, Carter is captured alive, we can plug in the whole white-apes-in-the arena sequence here. In fact, we can largely pick up the rest of the movie –  Thoris and her father agreeing to her marriage, Carter leading the Tharks to attack Zodanga, then going on to Helium, lots of swordfighting and great leaps, etc., etc., with various tweaks and changes for pacing and continuity. The Therns may need a bit more massaging as well. Also, we can have Kantos Kan show up again — perhaps looking for Carter at Thoris’s request — and help lead the Tharks first to Zodanga and then (in the nick of time aerial cavalry arrival of the Tharks) to Barsoom.

That’s my at-one-sitting, I’m-definitely-not-a-screenwriter take on how to improve the film. This film would have been a good 20+ minutes shorter; John Carter would have been a far more enjoyable and sympathetic character, and we’d focus more on the swashbuckling and romance.

So much for my $0.02 worth. Thoughts?  ..bruce w..

P.S. I’ll keep tweaking this as I think of other changes.

I first read “A Princess of Mars” by Edgar Rice Burroughs early in high school, over 40 years ago. I loved the novel and enjoyed the ten (yes, ten) that followed, though none were quite as good or as wildly romantic. So I’ve followed with interest over the past several years the various attempts to bring it to the screen. Today, at last, I got to see “John Carter”, Andrew Stanton’s vision of ERB’s novels.

The effort: a good solid “B”, though given the various budget estimates for the film, that’s probably not good enough. Disney must be hoping and praying for a massive international market, because the film — which clocks in at 2:19 — will most likely not make its costs back here in the US. I’d love to be pleasantly surprised, but I suspect it won’t cross $150 million (and maybe not $100 million) domestically.

The film, as a film, has a beautiful realization of ERB’s Barsoom (the locals’ name for Mars). But it suffers from three major faults. The first, pointed out over i09 yesterday, is that it has too many stories going on. The second is that it takes too long to get to Mars. The third is that it changes John Carter from a swashbuckling, devil-may-care, Errol Flynn-type character to a angsty, angry, semi-tragic figure. (It also changes Dejah Thoris — the princess of Mars — from a warrior princess to a warrior scientist princess, but that’s not necessarily a bad thing. IMHO.) There are a few minor faults as well, some of which I’ll touch upon.

All three major faults are related. The opening sequence — both involving ERB’s receipt of Carter’s diary after his untimely ‘death’ and Carter’s discovery of the mysterious cave — could have been shortened by a good 10 minutes at least, and the movie would have been better for it. Likewise, the whole set of flashbacks regarding Carter’s wife and child (which he doesn’t have in the books) could have been excised, which would have dropped another few minutes at least. And, frankly, Carter would have been a more likeable and sympathetic character without the whole fight-in-the-calvary-post sequence and wife-and-child flashbacks. What should have been a fun and entertaining film too often becomes, in my wife’s one-word criticism, “ponderous”.  And, frankly, they should have introduced Dejah Thoris earlier and without the extended back-story-and-battle.

As for the minor faults, I don’t mind at all how they changed the Therns or the means by which Carter gets to and from Mars — it works better for a modern audience and gives a scientific twist to what was frankly more supernatural in ERB’s novels. But then they blew it by making Carter’s leaps and strength way out of proportion to what he could actually do in a 1/3-earth-gravity situation. Burroughs himself is guilty of this — he describes Carter’s first leap under Martian gravity as carrying him “fully thirty feet into the air and [landing] a hundred feet from my pursuers.” But the movie carries it far beyond that, with Carter making even more impossibly long and high leaps, at times while catching or carrying others. Woola (the calot) was also way too fast, and the moons of Mars were too large and too close together.

I know that Andrew Stanton, the director, has plans laid out for two more films, but I don’t think we’ll see them. And Stanton won’t come out of this looking good, either.

Spoilers, such as they are, after the jump. In the meantime, here are some thoughts of mine on how the film could have been better. That post also highlights what appears to be a massive chronology/continuity flaw in the film.

SPOILERS, more or less

The very ending — when Carter fakes his own death and draws Matai Shang to his tomb in order to (a) kill him and (b) get the medallion Carter needs to return to Mars — is a nice twist. But I’m still not sure it needed the long on-Earth prelude at the start of the movie.

That’s about all I can think of as a spoilers.  After all, the novel has been around for 100 years or so.   ..bruce w..

I continue to make progress, even though I didn’t do nearly as much exercising as I should have this week. Still, I’ve lost 20.1 lbs out of my initial goal of 30 lbs, and I still have 7 weeks to go. The steady loss is all the more impressive when you consider that my Cheat Day weight gain last weekend was nearly 7 lbs — probably because I started ‘Cheat Day’ early (Friday night) due to being invited over by some close friends for dinner.

I also noticed this morning while doing my ‘laps’ up and down the driveway that it’s getting noticeably easier to go up the driveway, which I attribute as much or more to the loss of weight as to any aerobic conditioning.

I’ve mentioned in earlier posts that I do a mass grilling of protein every 7-10 days, then use the leftovers for my (non-cheat-day) meals. The photo above shows most of what I grilled a few days ago. From upper left, in clockwise fashion, we have:

• rockfish and salmon
• both chicken and buffalo sausages
• sirloin steaks
• hamburger patties

What the photo doesn’t show are the boneless chicken breasts — cut lengthwise in half and marinated in Tabasco sauce — that were still out on the grill. All the grilling turned out well, though the rockfish was a bit bland and underwhelming; I got it mostly to try something other than the salmon (which always turns out great).

Speaking of the salmon — my sweet wife suffers a lot from joint pain and typically uses a lot of ibuprofin on a regular basis. Since I started grilling fresh salmon some weeks ago — which she now eats several times a week as a result — she’s noticed that she has far less joint pain and that her use of ibuprofin has dropped significantly. Anecdotal, but for what it’s worth.

After making white beans and ham hocks for the last three or four weeks, I made a large batch of my Grandpa Jack’s Mexican beans instead. This is (IMHO) a great 4HBD food, since it’s got both beans and a lot of protein. I linked to the recipe in an earlier 4HBD post, but I thought I’d reproduce the recipe here.

Here’s the basic proportion of ingredients; you can scale this up as you’d like (I typically prepare a triple batch, but you need to have a very large pot to do that):

• 1 lb dried pink beans
• 1-2 lbs meat, ground and/or diced (I use beef or pork; however, I suspect chicken or turkey would work well. I usually use 2 lbs meat per 1 lb of dried beans.)
• 1 tablespoon pepper
• 1 lb (16 oz) Mexican chorizo (either beef or pork)
• 1/2 to 1 tablespoon salt

A brief aside: for many years, the Mexican chorizo typically came in 16 oz packages. However, the infamous Grocery Shrink Ray has struck, and most packages are now just 10 or 12 oz. Adjust accordingly. Personally, I find that “too much” chorizo tastes better than too little; in my triple batch this week, I used 50 oz (five 10-oz packages) of chorizo. Also, feel free to mix meat types; I find that beans made with ground beef and pork chorizo have a great flavor to them.

Rinse the beans; put in a heavy pot and cover with water and let them soak overnight. In the morning, pour off the water, rinse the beans, drain again, and then cover them generously with water. Bring to a gentle boil; add the pepper. Let cook until the beans are tender, usually a few hours. Add the meat (if using ground beef or pork, crumble it into the pot); stir.  Cook for a few hours more, adding water as needed, though you don’t want to add too much. Add the chorizo by slicing open its packaging and squeezing it into the beans. It will dissolve in a little while; stir until it does. Simmer for a few hours more. Finally, add the salt (you want to add this as late as possible, since it will stop the beans from softening). Adjust seasonings (more salt and/or pepper) to taste. Continue to simmer as long as you’d like. Note that this makes a great crock pot recipe.

In all this, stir the beans on a regular basis and take care not to let the beans burn on the bottom of the pot; if that does happen, do not scrape the bottom of the pot. Instead, pour the beans into another container, then scape off the bottom of the pot (into the trash), clean the pot thoroughly, put the beans back in, and continue. The goal is to neither add too much nor too little water, so that the beans have a nice, thick consistency when you are ready to serve them. You can refrigerate or freeze and reheat; they simply get better each time they are reheated. With the triple batch I made this week, I froze half and put the other half in the fridge.

I’m going to push a bit harder on exercise this week, mostly by being more consistent. Meanwhile, I’m going to go have a large cheesy Mexican meal for lunch somewhere.  ..bruce w..

Those who “abjure” violence can only do so because others are committing violence on their behalf. — George Orwell, Notes on Nationalism

This film has gotten a fair amount of ‘net publicity — though probably not nearly enough regular marketing — because of its fundamental concept: film a movie about what Navy Seals do, using actual Navy Seals and, by the way, a lot of live ammunition. It sounds like a recipe for a heartfelt but amateur film.

While it is heartfelt, it is anything but amateur.

Yes, the Seals themselves tend to sound just a bit stilted when talking with each other, as I suspect most of us would if we were filmed. But after a while, that just adds to the ambiance of the film. What came through is that these are real men who train for and carry out exactly these missions. At no point in the film did I roll my eyes or make a quiet snide comment to my wife. Nor was there any hint of political correctness, stupid plot twists, or Hollywood tropes (save one, but see below). The film had great direction, great cinematography, great sound, and great editing.

What I was not prepared for at the end of the film was the list of Naval Special Warfare personnel who have died in the line of duty since 9/11. It was a much longer list than I would have expected. My wife and I were quiet when we left the film and for most of the drive home. As we walked out of the theater, past the posters for various coming films, I was struck in a new way how fatuous most of what Hollywood produces is, compared to a film such as this.

While it is doubtful that George Orwell ever said, “People sleep peacefully in their beds at night only because rough men stand ready to do violence in their behalf,” it is a true fact nevertheless. God bless such rough men in the service of the United States.

Highly recommended. Some spoilers after the jump.

SPOILERS

One of the lead characters, Roarke, is leaving behind a pregnant wife, and you know, you know as soon as you learn that, that he isn’t going to make it through the film. Yet it is powerful nevertheless. Because what happens is that a grenade is thrown into the midst of his team; he looks at it, and time slows down, and you find yourself asking, “What would I do? I have a wife, an unborn child at home. I can throw myself back away from it.” But Roarke does what so many military men have done, including those with wives and children — he throws himself on it and is killed, but saves the rest of his team thereby.

This has particular emotional resonance with me, because my nephew Darren is in the Marines. He has served two tours in Afghanistan and came back stateside to go through special weapons training before going back for a third tour — which has since been canceled due to the draw-down of US forces. He has a lovely young wife and an infant son, and yet he was not only willing but eager to go back to Afghanistan for that third tour. (His wife, God bless her, chewed his ass something fierce when he expressed disappointment over not being able to go back again.) Again, God bless not just the rough men who keep us safe, but their families as well. ..bruce w..

Clothes fit much better. I bought a pair of jeans with a waste size 2″ smaller than all my existing jeans, and I was able to put them out. It wasn’t easy, but then again, getting my existing jeans on wasn’t easy before I started this regime. On the other hand, when we moved to Colorado nearly seven years ago, I owned and could wear jeans whose waste size was 4″ smaller than my existing jeans, so I have a ways to go.

At my wife’s suggestion, I’ve started making large batches of white beans and ham hocks. This dish gets better with time and reheating, turning into something approaching bean-with-bacon soup, though with no sugar. Here’s the recipe I used for the latest batch:

• 3 lbs dried great northern beans
• 3 tablespoons black pepper
• 1/4 cup vinegar (I used malt vinegar in this batch)
• one large smoked ham shank, pre-cut (usually found in the “weird meats freezer” section of your supermarket)
• 1 tablespoon salt

Put the beans in a (very large) pot, rinse thoroughly, cover with water (several inches higher than the beans), let soak overnight. In the morning, pour off the water, rinse the beans again, then cover them with water, and put the pot on the the stove. Bring to a boil, then simmer (just boiling) for 2 hours or so. Stir in the pepper and vinegar, then add the ham shank. If you’d like, you can add other meat at this time: diced ham, sliced sausage, chopped bacon, etc. Simmer (again, right at a low boil) for another 2-3 hours, then add the salt. (You want to add salt as late as possible, since it stops most beans from softening any further.) At this point, you have a pretty classic white-beans-and-ham-shank soup, with a clear broth. However, if you keep it cooking and/or if you refrigerate the leftovers and then reheat it, the broth starts to thicken and turn whitish-brown. This makes a great beans side dish for 4HB meals.

Gotta go now; it’s my cheat day, and my wife and I are heading to the movies, where I can indulge in nachos and candy.  ..bruce w..