Comments on: Chapter 10: Dealing with Obstacles http://andstillipersist.com Sat, 13 Feb 2010 19:17:23 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: danfranklinusa http://andstillipersist.com/works-in-progress/the-art-of-ware-2nd-edition/chapter-10-dealing-with-obstacles/comment-page-1/#comment-112 danfranklinusa Fri, 01 Jun 2007 02:08:22 +0000 http://and-still-I-persist.com/?page_id=254#comment-112 Typo: "or if Apple has licensed the Macintosh OS to hardware manufacturers several years sooner," has => had Grammar: "When the CEO who pushes a new product forward without seeking all the glory, and who withdraws from a market without worrying about criticism or blame, but whose sole purpose is to protect employees and to serve the best interests of the company and its investors, is rare and priceless." Omit initial "when" (or otherwise rewrite) Typo: “or if Apple has licensed the Macintosh OS to hardware manufacturers several years sooner,” has => had

Grammar: “When the CEO who pushes a new product forward without seeking all the glory, and who withdraws from a market without worrying about criticism or blame, but whose sole purpose is to protect employees and to serve the best interests of the company and its investors, is rare and priceless.” Omit initial “when” (or otherwise rewrite)

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